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Anonymous asked: i love you but that is the most painful scansion i've seen since my preteen sister's attempts at songwriting, it was not ready for the light of day
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deusvulture: I can’t find a tune/cadence that works at all for more than one stanza - hints?
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kontextmaschine:

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Yeah, it was composed two lines at a time, I was thinking \u201cwell *I* know how to say it\u201d but every time I try I end up editing a few words.

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It\u2019s doggerel, but it\u2019s good doggerel

ethnianmandarin: consider meter
\n\nLOOK DO YOU REALIZE HOW HARD IT WAS TO GIVE ~400 YEARS OF GEOPOLITICS~ END AND SLANT RHYME IN THE FIRST PLACE"}